Fievel's Art

Fievel · 02-10-2009

I know these arent the best drawings, but I decided to post these all in one thread so i could get some feedback.

Error404 · 02-10-2009

It started out okay...But. Then.

WHAT THE HELL? O.o

Tygon · 02-10-2009

That is.. a significant amount of excrement for such a little mouse.

Ignoring the actual content of the last three pics, I will say that they are my favorites simply because you depict the action and facial expressions well. One can actually get an idea of a storyline from them (mouse scared sh... wait, the forum's PG, right?), which can be hard to do. Basically, they look like rough sketches--before refining lines, adding color & backgrounds--for panels in a comic book.

NeiNei · 02-10-2009

At first I was all like "Okay, that's pretty good..."

But then I kinda went:

Just a little too much for me, but you've got some pretty good skills.

EDIT: From the pic, I meant that my jaw dropped unexpectedly. Don't tase me, bro! I like the facial expressions, by the way.

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Fievel Regular Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: California, USA Posts: 33 Threads: 3 Blog Entries: 3 Reputation: 0	Fievel's Art I know these arent the best drawings, but I decided to post these all in one thread so i could get some feedback. Last edited by Fievel; 02-10-2009 at 08:46 PM. Reason: the last picture was too much for many people.

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02-10-2009	#2 (permalink)
Error404 Angel of Innocence. Join Date: May 2008 Location: England. Age: 20 Posts: 1,567 Threads: 71 Wiki Edits: 10 Reputation: 56	It started out okay...But. Then. WHAT THE HELL? O.o

02-10-2009	#3 (permalink)
Tygon VIP Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Up North, USA Age: 23 Posts: 236 Threads: 11 Gallery Uploads: 1 Reputation: 13	That is.. a significant amount of excrement for such a little mouse. Ignoring the actual content of the last three pics, I will say that they are my favorites simply because you depict the action and facial expressions well. One can actually get an idea of a storyline from them (mouse scared sh... wait, the forum's PG, right?), which can be hard to do. Basically, they look like rough sketches--before refining lines, adding color & backgrounds--for panels in a comic book.

02-10-2009	#4 (permalink)
NeiNei Sparky's Mommy Pup <3 Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida, USA Posts: 413 Threads: 6 Gallery Uploads: 2 Wiki Edits: 2 Blog Entries: 14 Reputation: 15	At first I was all like "Okay, that's pretty good..." But then I kinda went: Just a little too much for me, but you've got some pretty good skills. EDIT: From the pic, I meant that my jaw dropped unexpectedly. Don't tase me, bro! I like the facial expressions, by the way.