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LinusBlueSnow · 01-09-2008

Great Story, I just wished that he'd gotten the girl in the end or at least got a girl. Overall, good story, grammar looked pretty sound to me and while I wished he'd gotten a girl, this was a great story and I hope to see more of your work.

01-09-2008	#15 (permalink)
LinusBlueSnow Regular Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: New Jersey Age: 20 Posts: 90 Threads: 4 Reputation: 3	Great Story, I just wished that he'd gotten the girl in the end or at least got a girl. Overall, good story, grammar looked pretty sound to me and while I wished he'd gotten a girl, this was a great story and I hope to see more of your work.