Dude this is amazing, I liked how the brotherly part with ethan and jared was more implied then up front, it made it very interesting. Also your pace and style are very very good and kept me latched to the story untill the very end, I might even go as far to say that you have some potential at being a writer! )ABDL content aside(I also wanna say that this is probably the best story of this genre I have ever read, and I have read some good ones.
Kudos man!
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