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Manveru · 06-05-2008

It's got potential. Give the MC some more detail (slow development is good too, if that's what you're planning on) and just slow the action down a little bit.

Haven't seen a regression story in a while, looking forward to reading more.

06-05-2008	#9 (permalink)
Manveru VIP Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Minnesota, USA Age: 21 Posts: 362 Threads: 39 Gallery Uploads: 22 Wiki Edits: 13 Blog Entries: 2	It's got potential. Give the MC some more detail (slow development is good too, if that's what you're planning on) and just slow the action down a little bit. Haven't seen a regression story in a while, looking forward to reading more.