thank you Genbaby for your critisism that was my intension with the topic title. I was going for a feel of a conversation/rant, Like if Rick was talking about what happened. although I'm getting the feeling it just comes off as "I HAZ A STORE 2 TEL!!!!!!111!!!!ELEVEN!"
I'm not trying to creat the greatest novel of the past 100 years, just some thing to lol with, or at the less help you kill your spare time.
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