[Baby Jake]

Originally Posted by Kenshin Himura

Please write more Jake, the way you wrote this I think you should continue it and keep the story going.

You know, I've been really thinking about it. Theres a lot of people that like this story for what it is (a better written version of more than half the stories that are on Deeker's site).

I left out certain details for a possible sequel if I ever decided to write one... and I'll admit I have a little document in my stories folder that has some ideas for a continuation. No promises though.

Have you read any of the other stories I've posted on here? Just curious.

Originally Posted by isaactheman

wow nice story! even though im striaght,i was fine with the graphic part lol anywayz.....really nice job keep it up! =]

lol thanks man.

Originally Posted by DannyTheNinja

Sorry for being unclear. The one I just read before that was David Mayter, the one you said you wrote around 2004. Comparing the two I really saw how much more polished this one was, so that's what I was trying to explain in my last post.

Thanks for taking my criticism the way it was intended, and that is to be constructive. Sorry if you had second thoughts about that, I criticize a lot of stories on here, though most of that was on the old forums. I guess what I was trying to say was that I really liked the story except for the more explicit scenes, which were a bit more detailed than is usually seen on ADISC. It's OK though because you gave us a warning, and I chose to read on in spite of it.

--Danny

Thanks for clarifying man, I knew what you meant but I couldn't help be confused. I understand its a bit over the top for what this board is used to seeing, and I was actually really reluctant at first to even post it here originally because of that. Glad you liked it