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Old 29-03-2008   #8 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Chromos View Post
I like it- but I have to comment that you need to spend some time on Capitalization and grammar.
I dont know if this was on purpose, but "capitalization" isnt supposed to be capitalized. lol.
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