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tdlrfootedpjs · 08-01-2009

Good start to the story, I think you should add a chapter #2 to it for when they both wake up from their nap and are together.

Good writing.

08-01-2009	#7 (permalink)
tdlrfootedpjs Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: usa Posts: 330 Threads: 12 Gallery Uploads: 10 Blog Entries: 5 Reputation: 6	Good start to the story, I think you should add a chapter #2 to it for when they both wake up from their nap and are together. Good writing.