Blarg,
Thank you for your suggestions on the grammatical stuff! I took note of them, so that way once I go through and do another complete edit, I can pop them in there and give them a shot!
As for the explanation for the infections, that's something I've been working on and trying out for a bit. If this story comes off as intended, it's going to be one part of a larger whole that incorporates newspaper articles, research journals, and letters from various characters in the world that will reveal small pieces of the reason for the outbreak and why it was caused. I love stuff that sucks a reader in through its presentation, and I hope I can do it with this, too!
More zombie murder on the way! After all, what's a zombie story without some good old-fashioned zombie destruction?
Thank you again for your encouragement and criticism, blarg!
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