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Dawes · 15-12-2008

Blarg,

You've got the general idea! There are definitely going to be more characters -- Paul's a wussy little bitch -- but he's just the one I wanted it to start with. As the story goes along, you'll find out more as to exactly why he was going to do what he was planning to do, and there are going to be other characters that get incorporated. I was actually intending to get the next vignette up tonight, and though I'm five pages into it, it's getting late, and I'm not seeing it getting completed and posted tonight.

I intend for there to be a lot of rapid scene-changes in it that eventually all come together near its end. I'll also take a look at the beginning! I don't mind that the beginning comes across a bit confusing, as the whole fucked-up ordeal of what happened to Paul just prior to the reader joining him is not something I want them to know until later on. I'll try to make it a little more exact, though!

Thanks for your critique, blarg! I hope you continue to enjoy it. I should have the next part (which I imagine will be a bit slower and less eventful, being that it's starting off with a new character) up tomorrow night, and I'm going to try to hold to that!

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Dawes Nummer Wun Hound Dog Donor Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Maryland, USA Age: 26 Posts: 1,517 Threads: 28 Blog Entries: 8 Reputation: 136	Blarg, You've got the general idea! There are definitely going to be more characters -- Paul's a wussy little bitch -- but he's just the one I wanted it to start with. As the story goes along, you'll find out more as to exactly why he was going to do what he was planning to do, and there are going to be other characters that get incorporated. I was actually intending to get the next vignette up tonight, and though I'm five pages into it, it's getting late, and I'm not seeing it getting completed and posted tonight. I intend for there to be a lot of rapid scene-changes in it that eventually all come together near its end. I'll also take a look at the beginning! I don't mind that the beginning comes across a bit confusing, as the whole fucked-up ordeal of what happened to Paul just prior to the reader joining him is not something I want them to know until later on. I'll try to make it a little more exact, though! Thanks for your critique, blarg! I hope you continue to enjoy it. I should have the next part (which I imagine will be a bit slower and less eventful, being that it's starting off with a new character) up tomorrow night, and I'm going to try to hold to that!