Rance,
You have a style of writing unlike anything I've seen before. It's very original, and you really are on par with professional big-league writers you find on the New York Times lists. The story flows better than anything I've read in quite a while, and the pacing in excellent. I especialy like the way you describe the situation; it brings about very detailed imagery in the reader's mind, making it a very believable and enjoyable story. There was one part in particular that I especially liked because of the image it brought to mind. Gory, bloody, violent, and excellent. You've got it all down pat.
I look forward to reading more from you.
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