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Candyman · 29-09-2008

I'm liking this, now that you've rewritten it. Space out paragraphs, every time someone speaks a new paragraph is made, and Im getting a feeling this is going to the same, basicly, as many stories Ive read.

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Candyman Regular Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Georgia, USA Age: 14 Posts: 1,089 Threads: 28 Blog Entries: 1 Reputation: 8	I'm liking this, now that you've rewritten it. Space out paragraphs, every time someone speaks a new paragraph is made, and Im getting a feeling this is going to the same, basicly, as many stories Ive read.